Do you honestly think Marshawn Lynch is incapable of constructing a proper sentence for his blog?!

Maybe after a few more semesters of college you will learn that the most crucial objective in persuasive writing is to appeal to your target audience. I highly doubt Marshawn intended to target self righteous idiots like jzpop when he wrote his first blog entry.

Marshawn is makin millions by being himself. In fact, Nike has even taken notice of Lynch's influence by placing him front and center of its rookie advertisement campaign. Gold grill and all -- Marshawn continues to communicate his point both on and off the field. Incidentally, Lynch has branded himself by being himself.

Initially I was only going to rip into the substance of your article but after a cursory glance it's obvious your grammar is FAR from perfect. For example in your article you wrote (I CAPITALIZED some my suggestions):

For starters, I hate improper grammar. Actually, hate is a strong word. I do not hate improper grammar. It does, however, bother me. And I understand that most of the time it is done subconsciously and we don't really notice. That is fine. It happens. FRAGMENT SENTENCE(S) However, I do hate when people use improper grammar intentionally. It demeans them as human beings, making them nothing more than the cats and dogs we have in our homes, because if you cannot communicate properly, and you are a fully functioning human being, than you are nothing more than a house pet. RUN ON SENTENCE -- TRY USING A SEMICOLON. Now, I do not expect this post to be perfect because I know it won't be. I will type too fast and skip a letter or jumble words. I will then go back and fix them so just accept it and enjoy the read.

The sad part is you INTENTIONALLY tried to write w/ proper grammar and even proofread the damn thing. Please stop hatin -- you have a 3 semesters of college NOT a PhD.

"It is better to keep your mouth closed and let people think you are a fool than to open it and remove all doubt" �" Mark Twain